# changes to haproxy_apache_lxd.md

[sspencerwire]

• wording changes from Anna
• sentence style capitalization on headings
• reword to eliminate conjunctions
• remove passive voice as much as possible
• replace "we" with "you" as much as possible
• simplify some sentences further

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

• Good fit for the Rocky Linux project? Title and Author Metatags inserted ?
• If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work
• Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

Rocky Documentation checklist (Completed by Rocky team)

• 1st Pass (Document is good fit for project and author checklist completed)
• 2nd Pass (Technical Review - check for technical correctness)
• 3rd Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
• Final approval (Final Review)

[github-actions]

Test results for 068e7cc:

Number of broken URLs: 4

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
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 https://github.com/ansible/ansible/blob/devel/examples/hosts,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md
 https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ansible/ansible/devel/examples/ansible.cfg,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md