re-standardize 'get to your weblog', fix a bug in weblog address

neatnik · Feb 17, 2023 · 24d8a14 · 24d8a14
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diff --git a/weblog/quickstart-1-intro.md b/weblog/quickstart-1-intro.md
@@ -28,20 +28,18 @@ You don't have to use our examples, but if you decide to experiment a little the
 
 If you haven't done anything with your weblog.lol account yet, there is not a lot to see. You can take a look by visiting your weblog using your omg.lol address: 
 
-`https://YOUR ADDRESS/weblog.lol`
+`https://YOUR ADDRESS.weblog.lol`
 
 If you haven't made a post yet, your browser will show something like this:
 
 ![A screenshot of a web browser showing a 'not found' page](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/neatnik/weblog.lol/main/images/ss_weblog_blank.jpg)
 
 It isn't very inspiring, but we're going to fix that. Let's start by getting you to your weblog.lol homepage: 
 
-- Visit <https://omg.lol>
-- Click "Dashboard"
-- Click "Weblog"
-
-(If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use and then click "Weblog") 
-
+1. Visit <https://omg.lol>.
+2. Click "Dashboard".
+3. If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use. If not, move on to the next step. 
+4. Click "Weblog". 
 
 You should be looking at a page with a new post ready to go in the editing area: 
 

diff --git a/weblog/quickstart-2-first-post.md b/weblog/quickstart-2-first-post.md
@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@ Now that you understand what front matter is and a little bit about how Markdown
 
 In case you closed your browser window between pages, here's how to get to your weblog (and a new post): 
 
-1. Visit <https://omg.lol>
-2. Click "Dashboard"
-3. Click "Weblog"
-
-(If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use and then click "Weblog") 
+1. Visit <https://omg.lol>.
+2. Click "Dashboard".
+3. If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use. If not, move on to the next step. 
+4. Click "Weblog". 
 
 You should be looking at an editing area with a fresh post ready to go. 
 

diff --git a/weblog/quickstart-3-personalize.md b/weblog/quickstart-3-personalize.md
@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@ Now that you've written a blog post or two and familiarized yourself with Markdo
 
 You can find the configuration page by visiting the main weblog.lol page. To get there:
 
-1. Visit <https://omg.lol>
-2. Click "Dashboard"
-3. Click "Weblog"
-
-(If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use and then click "Weblog") 
+1. Visit <https://omg.lol>.
+2. Click "Dashboard".
+3. If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use. If not, move on to the next step. 
+4. Click "Weblog". 
 
 
 Once you're there, you should see a new blog post screen. Look below the blog post's text area for a button that says "Configuration" and click it. You'll see a text area that looks a lot like the blog post editing area. Feel free to click inside that text area and look around. 

diff --git a/weblog/quickstart-4-pages.md b/weblog/quickstart-4-pages.md
@@ -30,11 +30,10 @@ We're also going to offer examples centered around a common use for pages on web
 
 Let's start by going to your main weblog.lol page. To get there:
 
-1. Visit <https://omg.lol>
-2. Click "Dashboard"
-3. Click "Weblog"
-
-(If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use and then click "Weblog") 
+1. Visit <https://omg.lol>.
+2. Click "Dashboard".
+3. If you have more than one omg.lol address, click the one you want to use. If not, move on to the next step. 
+4. Click "Weblog". 
 
 Once you're there, you should see the familiar new blog post screen.