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canaries/README.md

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 The files in this directory serve as both example code for displaying image streams and scripts for our canary releases.
 
-A **canary release** (or canary launch or canary deployment) allows developers to have features incrementally tested by a small set of users[^1]. To set up these canaries on Debian-based Linux distribution follow the steps below.
+A **canary release** (or canary launch or canary deployment) allows developers to have features incrementally tested by a small set of users[^1]. To set up these canaries on a Debian-based Linux distribution follow the steps below.
 
 #### Install Python3 dependencies 
 ```bash
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 WantedBy=multi-user.target
 ```
 #### Create a secrets file
-This file contains the address the payload arguments for both canary scripts. It MUST be in the location below
+This file contains secrets/arguments for both canary scripts. It MUST be in the location below.
 ```bash
 $ cat ~/.canary_secrets.json                         
 {
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 ```
 
 
-[^1]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Feature_toggle#Canary_release
+[^1]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Feature_toggle#Canary_release